Ass. #3

My essay is a little bit confusing (I think). I just used passages from the book for examples to support my point about technology. Also, reading other people essay helped me with my essay. What there points of views were about the two stories. Reading other peoples essay really helped me because they are somewhat in the same situation that i am in writing a essay. A techniques i used to write my essay was to look for key words, for example technology.